Verleih_uns_Frieden: Korrekturwünsche von Every

2 files changed, 16 insertions, 16 deletions

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@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ frauenPausen = {
   s2 r4 |
   r2 s4 |
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-  s4 r2 |
+  s2 r4 |
   R2.*6 |
   s2.*7 |
   s2 r4 |
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ maennerPausen = {
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+  s2 r4 |
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@@ -71,8 +71,8 @@ maennerPausen = {
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-  s2 r4 |
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   es4^\mf g f |
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@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ altMelodie = \relative es' {
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+  es s4 |
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@@ -223,7 +223,7 @@ tenorMelodie = \relative es {
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   b2^\> as4 |
   g(^\p f2) |
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   s2 b4^\p |
   g'2. |
@@ -244,8 +244,8 @@ tenorMelodie = \relative es {
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-  s2 as4^\p |
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   s2.*5 |
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   g( f2) |
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+  es s4 |
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@@ -325,8 +325,8 @@ bassMelodie = \relative es {
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